7th January 2009 |

What Do you honestly think of this?????------ POETRY?

  • Your Love Spell



    each moment that i had looked into your eyes i saw,
    i saw the kindness i had delved for,
    i saw love and kindness, beauty and faith,
    but what was to be love was only a lie,
    you had broken my trust,
    you had broken my love for you,
    every thing we had was gone in a minute,
    i trusted you and got pain in return,
    how could you love her when you loved me,
    how could you tell me so many lies and made me presuppose,
    i loved you dearly,
    you calmed to love me,
    you had hypnotist me,
    you'd cast me in your love spell,
    but now i know one plus one doesn't always equal two,
    and some times love is just merely pain under a mask


  • use better descriptive words like gazed. If you have to look up some vocabulary. change hypnotist to hypnosis on. otherwise it's glorious.


  • its awesome, just fix the typo's and such.!







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